Writing & Grammar: Name That Error

by Jennie Ruby

"Why did you change my sentence? I liked it the way it was." If you edit other people's writing, you will face this question at some point. To be prepared to answer it, you need to know the names of common grammar errors that a writer can make. And, of course, it helps to know how to fix them. Here are some examples of sentences with problems. Can you name the grammar and punctuation errors? Can you fix them? I'll bring you the answers next week.

1. Using the new iPad app, the best erosion control method can be found quickly.

    

2. A basic telescope can allow you to see Jupiter and its moons but for more distant objects such as the Crab Nebula you need more serious gear.

    

3. The new second-generation processor delivers improved resolution, it transforms your ordinary video into a stunning feast for the eyes.

    

4. Improving the computer's speed on benchmark tests by only 2.4%, graphics were still slow to upload after the upgrade.

    

5. To prevent hacking of the present system and work toward a long-term solution while saving money along the way.

    

6. While one may need an industrial-grade personnel training solution in the long term, you can still address basic needs with an entry-level system today.

    

7. This training forum allows you to discuss newly developed materials, upload samples for beta testing and to receive detailed feedback from your colleagues.

    

8. Building management gave the task of self-publishing the materials to all of the development office staff, including myself.

My next live, online grammar class is a one-day review, May 10. Bring your actual problem sentences, hyphenation questions, and other grammar conundrums and have them answered once and for all. Sign up now to allow time for your copy of Abrams' Guide to Grammar to arrive before the class.

About the Author:  Jennie Ruby is a veteran IconLogic trainer and author with titles such as "Editing with Word 2003 and Acrobat 7" and "Editing with MS Word 2007" to her credit. She is a publishing professional with more than 20 years of experience in writing, editing and desktop publishing.