Writing & Grammar: Pardon the Interruption

by Jennie Ruby View our profile on LinkedIn
 
You can interrupt a sentence four different ways–with dashes, parentheses, commas, or no punctuation at all.

Dashes actually emphasize the interruption, like this:

One of the best things about the previous two versions–the versions before the company was taken over by XYX, Inc.–was the user interface.

Parentheses de-emphasize the interruption:

The correspondence between the codes (see Table 2) is nearly one-to-one.

Commas indicate an interruption that is not essential to the meaning of the sentence:

 The new interface, we all agree, is much easier to use.

Interruptions with no punctuation are essential to the meaning of the sentence:

The function that has been changed the most is the video editor.

Challenge

Give a try to punctuating the interruptions in the sentences below.  When ready, post your answers as comments.

  1. It is very tedious in my opinion to type on a flat screen.
  2. The blog even after the extensive upgrade we purchased last quarter was still slow to load on mobile devices.
  3. The most widely accessible option according to the magazine is still the print version.
  4. The company that provides the fastest downloads is still XYZ.
  5. Norman who arrived at the classroom before the computers were turned on noticed the change in temperature right away.
  6. A more extended listing (see Appendix B) has been compiled by XYZ Press.

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